Analysis of rough cut

Negatives:

• No build up (narrative enigma, establishing shot)​
• Bedroom content not very helpful​
• False scare doesn’t work (get audience feedback)​
• Too long shots​
• Unclear scenes​
• Killer is wearing trainers​
• Lighting ​
• Include non-diegetic music/sound​
• Improve lair scene​
  
  
  
  
  Conventions to reflect on:
  • No build up (narrative enigma, establishing shot)​
  • Bedroom content not very helpful​
  • False scare doesn’t work (get audience feedback)​
  • Too long shots​
  • Unclear scenes​
  • Killer is wearing trainers​
  • Lighting ​
  • Include non-diegetic music/sound​
  • Improve lair scene​
  
  
  
  
  Things to change in next edit:
  - Improve lair scene
  - Shorten takes to build tension
  - Remove shots that does not make much sense
  
  
  Re-shoot:
  - False scare
  - Establishing shot
  - Narrative enigma